Honestly... I don't know what to say except too many types of plants. I cannot detect the design you are trying to go for. No focal point.
Why pet-peeve that I've yet to voice... what's with Singaporean aquarists and meshes... they are ugly. Plants seldom cover the edges of the meshes sufficiently and they show up at the edges of the carpet. The flatness and arches are unnatural looking. Try to use pebbles and wood like amano. Or at least hide the edges of the meshes.
I apologise that I have nothing nice to say about your scape. No offence meant. I'll be happy to share with you what I know of scaping concepts with you at the workshop.
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