Hi there,
Good job. My own opinion only okay. Your focal is that big rock on the left yes. I would place two rocks near to it. Two rocks that are slightly smaller to accompany that big rock. Placing it close, making it a nice focal point. Take note, you did a good job, keep doing it. I'm just saying what if I do. End of the day, you'll be looking at it everay with your family. So if it looks nice, everyone will enjoy. Very relaxing.
For the front, try to straighten it. It'll look better if the foreground is straight.
good job on the tone of the rocks. All same. The big rock seem to have black colour. Is it the soil that got on it? You wet the soil already? Because it looks like what happen to mine when I rescape. The soil sticks to the rocks and plants.
The back part. Smaller rocks. What plants do you intend to place there? If it's mid or those rotala plant, it'll get covered.
Good job nonetheless. Keep the update coming. =)
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